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Blacksmith



Joined: 25 Jan 2005
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Location: Berkshire
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 5:59 pm    Post subject: Title and description help please ! Reply with quote
    

I have recently been asked to make some more display stands, there is obviously a gap in the market, I would like to fill it .
I want to get some business cards and advertising postcards printed ( good old Vista print )
I wondered what you good people thought of my title and description for cards, adverts in magazines, websites etc etc
A. Display Stands.
B. Bespoke Display
C. Bespoke Display Stands.
D. Handcrafted Display Stands.

1. Individually handmade from metal, wood and acrylic.
2. Hand made stands for artifacts, collectibles and museums.
3. For museums, antiquities and collectibles,
Individually hand crafted from metal wood and acrylic.
4.for collectors, museums and antiquarians.

This is the type of thing I make, ta for any advice/input.
Dave.

tahir



Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 45672
Location: Essex
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Bespoke display stands hand crafted from metal, wood and acrylic. Large runs or small.

Sarah D



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

D and 1 for me, seem more inclusive.

snowball
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Wot Tahir said.
Hits all the right buttons and has a nice ring to it.

Blue Sky



Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

What's with the big red rubber duvet cover?

Sorry,

C-1 I reckon

Sarah D



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    


dpack



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

d 1
best of mate

sean
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Location: North Devon
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Simon wrote:
What's with the big red rubber duvet cover?


It's for his big red rubber duvet of course. Derrrr.

What Tahir said, in answer to the question.

AnneandMike



Joined: 21 Jun 2006
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Location: Over the hill and soon to be far away
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

I like D and 3.

Blacksmith



Joined: 25 Jan 2005
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Location: Berkshire
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 8:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Thanks Even more confused now........... (closes eyes, gets out pin and picks one...... bursts rubber duvet )

alisjs



Joined: 23 Jun 2006
Posts: 1497
Location: Conwy
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 8:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

I go for D and 1 as well.
For no good reason I can think of, I don't like the word "bespoke" !!!!

dougal



Joined: 15 Jan 2005
Posts: 7184
Location: South Kent
PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 07 9:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Like Alisjs, I'd avoid the word bespoke.

Display stands, tailor made to your requirements.
Handcrafted in metal, wood and acrylic.
One off or dozens - ask us!

mochyn



Joined: 21 Dec 2004
Posts: 24585
Location: mid-Wales
PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 07 5:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

You aren't half clever, aren't you, Blacksmith? Wish I could do stuff like yours.

Blacksmith



Joined: 25 Jan 2005
Posts: 5025
Location: Berkshire
PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 07 9:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

mochyn wrote:
You aren't half clever, aren't you, Blacksmith? Wish I could do stuff like yours.

1. Buy a welder.
2. Spend a couple of weeks in the shed practicing.
3. As good as me

Cathryn



Joined: 16 Jul 2005
Posts: 19856
Location: Ceredigion
PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 07 10:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

there goes your market then

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