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Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Sat May 20, 06 7:53 pm Post subject:
OK, so the "bricks" have gone as has "our commune". Will keep working on the rest.

2steps

Joined: 05 Sep 2005
Posts: 5349
Location: Surrey

Posted: Sat May 20, 06 8:17 pm Post subject:
look great but I didn't think it was very clear how many people could stay in the cottage. At first I thought just 2 adults and a baby but then another page said there was a sofa bed so it'd be fine for more

Cathryn

Joined: 16 Jul 2005
Posts: 19856
Location: Ceredigion

Posted: Sat May 20, 06 9:11 pm Post subject:
I would have to agree about the photos - so take some more time - and alter the angles a bit - they were a bit straight on in the bedroom and not clear what aspect you were selling int he kitchen. Useful space or cosy space you know the sort of thing. Re: the guest bit - I went straight to add a message when I came on line but I had to log on - funny that - I might try it again in a minute.

Bernie66

Joined: 14 Jan 2005
Posts: 13967
Location: Eastoft

Posted: Sat May 20, 06 9:16 pm Post subject:

ruby wrote:

Re: the guest bit - I went straight to add a message when I came on line but I had to log on - funny that - I might try it again in a minute.

Sometimes the hamsters on the wheel supplying the electrics for the site are on a break so it malfuncions a bit

Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Sat May 20, 06 10:13 pm Post subject:

ruby wrote:

... take some more time - and alter the angles a bit - they were a bit straight on in the bedroom and not clear what aspect you were selling int he kitchen.

OK, I'll try

Don't want to get caught perching on top of the wardrobe with my digi-cam

I see your point though so will try for better angles int' morning.

Thanks for your input folks.

S

(& nite nite)

Nick

Joined: 02 Nov 2004
Posts: 34535
Location: Hereford

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 7:14 am Post subject:
Hawthorne doesn't have an e. Commune still occurs on the price list page. How about putting prices in Sterling as well as Euro, even if only approximate.

Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:27 pm Post subject:
Cheers Nick Keep 'em coming Not got much done on it today as our next guests are here.

sean
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Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 42219
Location: North Devon

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:30 pm Post subject:

simon wrote:

Not got much done on it today as our next guests are here.

Bloody customers eh? I bet you'd have it all looking lovely if people didn't keep using it.

nettie

Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 5888
Location: Suffolk

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:38 pm Post subject:
OY!!!!

Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:46 pm Post subject:
Well, I meant the website actually. Not the cottage itself. That is far too physical Anyhow ...

sean
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Joined: 28 Oct 2004
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Location: North Devon

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:48 pm Post subject:

The traditional stone built cottage is located to the rear of the house with privacy provided by conifers and a hawthorne hedge. It has undergone a complete redecoration programme both internally and externally for this season. A spacious outdoor seating area is provided adjacent to the cottage for private use by our guests. In addition to this we have a large front garden with picnic benches and a barbeque which can also be made available.

'Our traditional stone-built cottage is at the rear of the main house. It has its own private hedged garden. We can also offer barbecue facilities and the use of our garden if needed.'

Might be better I think. I wouldn't mention the redecoration meself, but if you want to then maybe: 'Recently refurbished, our traditional...'

Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:50 pm Post subject:
Thanks Sean I'll have another look in the morning. It is gone midnight here and way past my bedtime. Much appreciated all the same. S

Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:52 pm Post subject:
... and thanks Nettie for the charming review. S&Z

nettie

Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 5888
Location: Suffolk

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:53 pm Post subject:
Hi Sean, it hasn't got a private garden. It's got a garden area that has privacy afforded by the conifers and hawthorn hedges. Thanks S&Z!!! (You haven't got the colorados yet, have you???) Need to sleep on this too, will have a go after yoga class tomorrow nite.

sean
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Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 42219
Location: North Devon

Posted: Sun May 21, 06 10:56 pm Post subject:
ahh. It has a secluded garden area surrounded by hawthorn and fir-trees. then.

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